Monday, January 29, 2007

The Queen Of Excess Commas, AND THEN, Lulu!

First:

Not counting ones embedded in phrases that have been deleted, thus far I have deleted 316 excess commas from The Vedia Gamble.

Second:

Acting on some very good advice, I went through the story and did a search on "then". I think I deleted about 75 of those.

Third:

The Lulu copy of the story is GORGEOUS. I finally got my mitts on it on Saturday. It looks soooooooo cool! I'm glad I took the time to do it, even if it's not the final version of the story.

The Lulu Book

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